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Hi guys,👋 I made a haiku poem again😕... But this time its about summer,🍦🌞Hope you enjoy it.😀
Kia ora Mariam, Well done with your effort! I really enjoyed the line "it melts like a raining cloud". The way you used the simile was interesting and created an image in my head. Did you use a thesaurus to find another word for nice? Keep up the great work!- Miss Laxa
Kia ora Mariam,
ReplyDeleteWell done with your effort! I really enjoyed the line "it melts like a raining cloud". The way you used the simile was interesting and created an image in my head. Did you use a thesaurus to find another word for nice?
Keep up the great work!
- Miss Laxa